This story more than captivated me when I was in ninth grade. I am so glad to see that you're doing such a great job with it. I'm looking forward to seeing what Essurio looks like. And I'll be waiting to see Colby's face when he discovers the truth. I can hardly wait to see the next page.
I can imagine someone reply "Yes, we r out here and we need help too." than another scream "we too out here and we need help too." than another and another.... stranded in middle of nowhere scene everywhere making middle of nowhere somewhere to do a stranded scene in middle of nowhere.