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Make sure you're all caught up at our website, www.makeshiftmiracle.com.

Artwork by Shun Hong Chan
Story by Me
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*Archie-The-RedCat Feb 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
and you left the bag in the mountains Colby!
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:iconzubby:
Yes he did. Just wait until next week when we follow up on that...
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Mood: Love ~Paradoje Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
where you got the idea for this story?
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:iconzubby:
It's a bunch of different things pushed together: my love of dramatic manga and coming of age stories mixed with surreal stuff like Neil Gaiman's Sandman series.
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~minimandy12 Feb 4, 2012   Artisan Crafter
cool
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*Rivalhopeso Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
uhhh my god the art is just so awesome!!! that reflection is perfect and i faved some pages, like the epic colby carrying new found iris through snowy woods xD

this is really super immersive. i really like the character of iris and she hasn't even said that much. Colby is pretty cool. he seems a bit of a social alien but he's a nice character. definitely fits the true hero who has yet to hatch from his shell :P it's really cool also how a lot of the text is presented like a blog/diary on computer. with the windows presented. though i'm not fully grasping the meaning of him complaining about people being selfish and quoting their woes on facebook but having this sort of running blog.
it's also great pacing. we've gotten to know his character quite well and the setting is nicely presented with a major event already happening with them meeting. with my manga project, i've already had like sixty different things happening and like 10 characters introduced in eleven pages >.< i guess it's coz i don't get much time to draw that often so i try to progess the story as much as possible in as little time

i'm really interestd to see what happens next. Keep it up!!
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:iconzubby:
Thanks so much for the in-depth thoughts and kind words.
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*Rivalhopeso Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem! looking forward to more!
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~mlsterben Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The real question he should be asking is why hasn't he taken off his scarf after he got inside.
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:iconzubby:
You'll be happy/sad to know that he doesn't have the scarf after this page. :P
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