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Makeshift Miracle Chap3 Pg4 by Zubby Makeshift Miracle Chap3 Pg4 by Zubby
"A naked meteor?"

Make sure you're all caught up at our website, www.makeshiftmiracle.com.

Artwork by Shun Hong Chan
Story by Me
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aniwablue Feb 3, 2012  Student General Artist
:D Very well done! Quite strange, but I like this kind of story!
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:iconwatercreess:
"naked meteor?" Lmao XD
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:iconozymandias13:
I don't mean to sound sexist, but it's a miracle this woman hasn't been raped yet. I can't help but wonder why she isn't doing the sensible thing and, oh I don't know, RUNNING AWAY? I haven't read much of this and am unfamiliar with the artist's portfolio, but this is pretty dumb.
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sharinggansamuel Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its either an alien who doesnt know what rape is....or she's a pure girl who knows nothing of sex....or she's a genie who hasnt been up in the world for thousands of years -_-

I wouldnt call it dumb

maybe a bit cliche.
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:icongerusadora:
A NAKED METEOR?

:lmao:
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:iconjaniaabigail:
Is it just me or did she radically change in the last frame? Her eyes are now dark green/gray instead of red and her entire facial expression changed.
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jackarcher12 Jan 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I have a MegamanX4 - Zero, Iris thing in mind... but I think its just me. Nvm LOL
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mlsterben Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
His name is the same as my third favorite cheese. :laughing:

If you make a character who turns out to be my favorite and his or her name is "Gruyere," I will buy the crap out of a hard edition. :D
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:iconedgekagami:
Actually, from the girl's point of view, I'm surprised she brought that part of the story from a stranger she knows the first time.
Maybe her personality is very trusting?

Anyway, awesome coloring!
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:iconbritsmc13:
Iris is such a pretty name :)
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